The Lightest Touch

"good morning"

photograph compliments of myopera

 

 

~~~

The lightest touch

 awakens the breaking dawn

 

ruffling the curtains of my imagination

opening the windows of my soul

to all that’s new

 

and I am a peach bloom rising

on a pastel breeze through painted skies

dew kissed and dressed in butterfly wings

and sunshine smiles

 

awaken day

awaken me...

 

with poetry

~~~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry.
"and I am a peach bloom rising
on a pastel breeze through painted skies
dew kissed and dressed in butterfly wings
and sunshine smiles"
The words took me to positive and beautiful thoughts and locations. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Good Morning! Thank you for you wonderful review of my poem! :) Julie

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'The lightest touch'
Ms.Jewel,
The really enjoyed the use of color and
nuances which hint of the soul being stirred.
"Ruffling the curtains of my imagination.'
That's how it works, right? Something brings an idea and then it grows until described and you did that . Lovely!
Bless you today.
Kathy

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'The lightest touch'
Ms.Jewel,
The really enjoyed the use of color and nuances which hint of the soul being stirred.
"Ruffling the curtains of my imagination.' That's how it works, right? Something brings an idea and the it grows until described and you did that . Lovely!
Bless you today.
Kathy

[Tom]

The new dawn invigorates the soul and what a way to start the day off !

A terrific early morning citation !

[MsJewel]

Thank you Tom and Good Morning! :) Julie

[redzone]

I used to live in a house with a back yard that I shared with the upstairs neighbors... we had a table and chairs and it was great to get up just before dawn and sit there with coffee in hand and wake to a new day... often I would take pen and paper and write down thoughts that would become poems; not as beautiful and "peach tasty" as your poem is, but it was a good way to start the day... I really loved your intro: "The lightest touch/awakens the breaking dawn". I think only someone who has sat and watched the sun come up really know this feeling, its "light touch"... I appreciate your writing this Julie, its just.... so deliciously "light"... ;o) be well Julie, ~~redzone

[MsJewel]

I run on the beach every morning just before the sun rises - and when it does - I have to stop for a few minutes and watch. It is breath taking - and the perfect way to start the day. I'm glad you enjoyed this one my friend. Hugs, Julie

[Pryde Foltz]

Splendiferous, Julie......

[MsJewel]

thank you Pryde! :) julie

[SyberRose]

Beautifully penned... I wake up in the morning and reading poetry is the first thing i do too after pouring myself a cup of coffee...a lovely piece Jewel...Rose:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Rose. I hope you're enjoying a beautiul day! :) Julie

[wordman]

and a beautiful morning it is awaken by beauty and grace great job
Ron

[MsJewel]

Thanks again for your lovely comments. :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a heck of a good way to wake up...with poetry...and this poem..
nicely worded piece...

makes me want to face a new day with a smile.

and my pen, of course.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful day! :) Julie