Weave the Moonlight

Weave the Moonlight

A Poem by MsJewel
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love poem

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Weave the moonlight up above

and spread my silken hair

upon your tender pillow love

as quietly we share

the slow pleasure of an embrace

within the warm eclipse

of the nights unhurried pace

while the glory of your lips

gathers all that’s sweet and fine

in a moment of pure bliss

and I will find the night divine

dressed in your tender kiss

and nothing else but your love

as you gently weave my name

in the moonlight up above…

and then I’ll do the same

 

~~~~~

© 2013 MsJewel


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this is exquisitely breathtaking...the imagery of your words
So enriched with the poetic beauty of emotional romantic sensuality...that
it's amazing!! I love the fluidty of this as well...not to mention
the title of this write. Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comment :) Julie
ms. barrie

10 Years Ago

You welcome, was a pleasure to read. I love the artwork as well :)



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Delightfully divine imagery and emotion in this one. There was a very delicate feel to this piece that resonated with the tone of the idea of romance.

dressed in your tender kiss -- a creative and evocative line...loved it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

11 Years Ago

Sarah, Thank you for your very kind comment. I apprecaite it very much! :) Julie
dear Julie... your poem is tender and romantic...
I love the rhyme of eclipse and lips...and
weaving the moonlight together is pure bliss.
truly entranced... Pat



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

11 Years Ago

((((Pat))) It is wonderful to see you my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs, Julie
...beautiful verse, Julie...and the graphic complimented so perfectly!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

11 Years Ago

Thank you Kelly! :) Julie
:) I love how softly your words always flow together so beautifully in all of you're writing it come from someone with a beautiful poetic heart like the one you have Julie. Hugs, Larry

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your very kind comment and compliment Larry. Have a beautiful day. :) Julie

Enchanting writing. Nicely poetic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :) Julie

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Tags: love, romance, moonlight

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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