Weave the Moonlight

love poem

 

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Weave the moonlight up above

and spread my silken hair

upon your tender pillow love

as quietly we share

the slow pleasure of an embrace

within the warm eclipse

of the nights unhurried pace

while the glory of your lips

gathers all that’s sweet and fine

in a moment of pure bliss

and I will find the night divine

dressed in your tender kiss

and nothing else but your love

as you gently weave my name

in the moonlight up above…

and then I’ll do the same

 

~~~~~

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

this is exquisitely breathtaking...the imagery of your words
So enriched with the poetic beauty of emotional romantic sensuality...that
it's amazing!! I love the fluidty of this as well...not to mention
the title of this write. Thank you for sharing :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comment :) Julie

[ms. barrie]

You welcome, was a pleasure to read. I love the artwork as well :)

[PANTHER811]

Goddess of the moon you are when poetic writes it grace. Your words of love, as moonbeams, shed tenderly upon the page. The beauty of your write as endless as the beauty of the night. Lucky man who gets to weave your name in moonlight. :)

[MsJewel]

((((Tom)))) It is always wonderful to see you! Thank you for stopping by with such a kind comment. Hugs, Julie

[Sasha]

Wow .. This poem is amazing !
Loved it !

[MsJewel]

Thank you so much for your very kind comment. I'm looking forward to reading your poetry. :) Julie

[Twisted Words (Tom)]

Your writing never disappoints. Always lovely, entertaining, and impressive.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind - thank you! :) Julie

[Traci]

as quietly we share
the slow pleasure of an embrace
within the warm eclipse
of the nights unhurried pace
while the glory of your lips
gathers all that’s sweet and fine
in a moment of pure bliss.."

Your words always portray such beautiful imagery and emotion. You have truly painted the perfect picture of love. Well done, Julie, definitely a new favorite of yours.

[MsJewel]

Traci, thank you so much for your lovely comment and compliment. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful evening. :) Julie

[Traci]

Always a pleasure to read your work Julie. Enjoy your evening :)

[Trace]

Work always seems to keep me away from what I enjoy most, and that is your poetry. But I am always rewarded with something magnificent when I come to your page and read your work. This is just beautiful poetry. Love, love it. Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you my very sweet friend. Hugs, Julie

[redzone]

these lines:
"as quietly we share
the slow pleasure of an embrace
within the warm eclipse
of the nights unhurried pace
while the glory of your lips
gathers all that’s sweet and fine
in a moment of pure bliss.."
I think are both the heart of your poem, as well as, the heart of your romanticism that is warmly captured in the feel and rhythym of this poem Julie..

I think that if we weave these "moonbeams" it would be your name and your face we would see "sikenly spread" across the night's shy.. Very cool.. ~~redzone

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment and compliment. I appreciate you and your friendship. :) Julie

[Keith]

Magnificent Julie, one of the best pieces that I have seen on WC. Thanks.

[MsJewel]

Keith, You are so kind. Thank you so much. Truly - you made my day. :) Julie

[Keith]

Its in my favs Julie.

[Desert Knave]

I love the subtle eroticism ("as quietly we share the slow pleasure of an embrace") as well as the tender romanticism. The cherry on top though is the rhyming and the quick, lilting rhythm as I read it. Really quite well written. ~Jim

[MsJewel]

Jim, It's wonderful to see you here. Thank you for taking the time to visit and leave such a wonderful comment. Have a lovely evening. Hugs, Julie

[Joyce S. Greene]

Truly beautiful, Julie. Sigh . . . If I could write such wonderful love poetry, I would be very happy. I hope your pen never runs dry!

[MsJewel]

Joyce, You are so kind. Thank you very much. Hugs, Julie

[Dr. Wood ?]

great tittle to an even greater poem....Simply wonderful

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comment. Have a lovely evening. :) Julie

[Dr. Wood ?]

morning now.....poem still looks good....