Weave the Moonlight

love poem

 

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Weave the moonlight up above

and spread my silken hair

upon your tender pillow love

as quietly we share

the slow pleasure of an embrace

within the warm eclipse

of the nights unhurried pace

while the glory of your lips

gathers all that’s sweet and fine

in a moment of pure bliss

and I will find the night divine

dressed in your tender kiss

and nothing else but your love

as you gently weave my name

in the moonlight up above…

and then I’ll do the same

 

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Reviews

[ms. barrie]

this is exquisitely breathtaking...the imagery of your words
So enriched with the poetic beauty of emotional romantic sensuality...that
it's amazing!! I love the fluidty of this as well...not to mention
the title of this write. Thank you for sharing :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comment :) Julie

[ms. barrie]

You welcome, was a pleasure to read. I love the artwork as well :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Weave the Moonlight"
Ms jewel,
You have given your poem a theme of loveliness. I see the tender moon's glow within this poem of sweetness. Well done.
blessings,
Kathy

[Falcon1]

Nothing can be more romantic than moonlight and love that shines from above and share a love so tender and blue sharing this love with you. I would gather nothing in this world if I miss the love of you. I would be sad and blue. My life would come unglued if I did not have you. With tenderness and loving care this I write this i dare.

[SmittyJas]

Pretty good stuff In your writing skills here Julie Loved reading you.

[William J. Marsh]

A peaceful yet passionate bliss. I have said it before about your work, and it remains true, you can put a reader in a moment of being within those words.

[MsJewel]

You are so kind. Thank you William. I'm so glad you enjoy my poetry. :) Julie

[Jack...]

Perfect rhyme and meter, this flows so perfectly. Love looks good on you my friend. You heart appears in what I read from you and it is a beautiful thing. Very, very nicely done.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jack. :) Julie

[Tom]

Oh yes indeed, that irrepressible old moon does conjure up and intensify carnal desires almost beyond our control !

A beautiful poem with a striking photo to compliment the theme !

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment. :) Julie

[TL Boehm]

the slow pleasure of your embrace....dressed in your tender kiss. breathy and beautiful poetry

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment. :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Warm and wonderful romance in this one, Julie. The tenderness of love is captured by your words. The rhyme scheme is divine and the graphic you chose to accompany your words was perfect! Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi - (you know I learned from the best...(you)! Hugs, Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a sweet thing to say, Julie. I think the student has surpassed the teacher!