Sweet..

Sweet..

A Poem by Julia

A word
left sweet and clear
freedom is given unwilling
but is taken back in the same
easily gone
but of course won't be taken back
without unfailing difficulty
I lost all control
The feelings of need or want
for his company died
in a single word
.....
Cattle

© 2009 Julia


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Wonderfully put forth. I so love how you made this come alive.. Powerful..

Mags xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


Words can be very powerful and hurtful. In my time I wish I could take many back. A powerful poem with wisdom.
Coyote

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on November 24, 2009
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Julia
Julia

Wylie, TX



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My name is Julia, I'm an undercover nerdy tattooed redneck. I'm a Tolkien purist as well as a tattoo/piercing enthusiast. I enjoy the outdoors to a certain extent minus water activities. I'm a goal-.. more..

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