I knew you were the one!!!
A Poem by
Julia
it was random but it has a side meaning..i just haven't figured it out yet
....i can see it......
...its written all over your face ...
........i don't know why you tried to hide it from me...
.....i already knew it from the every beginning.......
....that your the one...... ...who stole my cookie....
© 2010 Julia
Author's Note
i change the name cuz i agree the title does give the end away but is the new title better?
Reviews
LOL short and sweet..
Posted 14 Years Ago
must have been the crumbs
Posted 14 Years Ago
must have been the crumbs
yay :D
Posted 14 Years Ago
yay :D
Better. (:
Posted 14 Years Ago
Better. (:
This is predictable because of the title so you might want to be a little bit more creative than that, but it's kind of funny. Nice work (:
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is predictable because of the title so you might want to be a little bit more creative than that, but it's kind of funny. Nice work (:
fun!!!~ just when you think it's going someplace dark it goes in the direction of delightful baked goods~ very welll set up!~ =)~
Posted 14 Years Ago
fun!!!~ just when you think it's going someplace dark it goes in the direction of delightful baked goods~ very welll set up!~ =)~
take out the text speak, and this is a masterpiece!
Posted 14 Years Ago
take out the text speak, and this is a masterpiece!
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Added on August 24, 2010
Last Updated on August 26, 2010
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Cookie ,
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Author
Julia Denton, TX
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all the writing are from the past before i gave up on writing...i was never good at being a writer and no matter how i thought i never could think of anything great....
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