I knew you were the one!!!
A Poem by
Julia
it was random but it has a side meaning..i just haven't figured it out yet
....i can see it......
...its written all over your face ...
........i don't know why you tried to hide it from me...
.....i already knew it from the every beginning.......
....that your the one...... ...who stole my cookie....
© 2010 Julia
Author's Note
i change the name cuz i agree the title does give the end away but is the new title better?
Reviews
LOL.......Just LOL nice write hun. made me smile
Posted 14 Years Ago
Love it!
I love a bit in the ending
Nice!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Love it!
I love a bit in the ending
Nice!
i llike it, it made me smile even though it was about stealing someones heart. the poem flows well and i think hidden meanings are great. welld one
Posted 14 Years Ago
i llike it, it made me smile even though it was about stealing someones heart. the poem flows well and i think hidden meanings are great. welld one
:)
Love it.
Posted 14 Years Ago
:)
Love it.
I get it, the cookies of love :)
nicely done...
Posted 14 Years Ago
I get it, the cookies of love :)
nicely done...
haha i loved it its so funny this poem could cheer anybody up once again love this hilarious poem
Posted 14 Years Ago
haha i loved it its so funny this poem could cheer anybody up once again love this hilarious poem
ha ha, nice poem, I really llike it lol aweosme
Posted 14 Years Ago
ha ha, nice poem, I really llike it lol aweosme
Lol i thought it was like a love thing! Lol i love this!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Lol i thought it was like a love thing! Lol i love this!
Haha, I thought I had an idea where this was going, but then it turned on a dime with the last line. Smile worthy :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Haha, I thought I had an idea where this was going, but then it turned on a dime with the last line. Smile worthy :)
very nice
Posted 14 Years Ago
very nice
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Added on August 24, 2010
Last Updated on August 26, 2010
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Author
Julia Denton, TX
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all the writing are from the past before i gave up on writing...i was never good at being a writer and no matter how i thought i never could think of anything great....
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