I knew you were the one!!!
A Poem by
Julia
it was random but it has a side meaning..i just haven't figured it out yet
....i can see it......
...its written all over your face ...
........i don't know why you tried to hide it from me...
.....i already knew it from the every beginning.......
....that your the one...... ...who stole my cookie....
© 2010 Julia
Author's Note
i change the name cuz i agree the title does give the end away but is the new title better?
Reviews
oh and by the way, im favoriting this
Posted 14 Years Ago
hahaha that was sooo funny! i did not expect that xD
Posted 14 Years Ago
hahaha that was sooo funny! i did not expect that xD
Haha!! very nice .. :))
Posted 14 Years Ago
Haha!! very nice .. :))
LMAO! This one was so great! :-D I haven't read a happy/silly poem in a long time. Love it :-)
Posted 14 Years Ago
LMAO! This one was so great! :-D I haven't read a happy/silly poem in a long time. Love it :-)
Nice, cute fun poem. My only criticism is the use of the numeral 1 instead of spelling out "one". Minor pet peeve of mine. We are writers so we use words. Leave the numbers to the mathematicians and accountants.
nice write.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Nice, cute fun poem. My only criticism is the use of the numeral 1 instead of spelling out "one". Minor pet peeve of mine. We are writers so we use words. Leave the numbers to the mathematicians and accountants.
nice write.
lol. Sweet poem
Put a smile on my face.
Posted 14 Years Ago
lol. Sweet poem
Put a smile on my face.
hahahahaha!!!
comical though....:P
Posted 14 Years Ago
hahahahaha!!!
comical though....:P
lol this is quite humorous at the end. I was so not expecting the last line to be what it was. This is very creative and a light hearted read that had me laughing.
Posted 14 Years Ago
lol this is quite humorous at the end. I was so not expecting the last line to be what it was. This is very creative and a light hearted read that had me laughing.
A interesting poem. Made me smile and want to know what is a cookie. Thank you for the fun poem this morning.
Coyote
Posted 14 Years Ago
A interesting poem. Made me smile and want to know what is a cookie. Thank you for the fun poem this morning.
Coyote
Very sweet.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very sweet.
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Added on August 24, 2010
Last Updated on August 26, 2010
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Author
Julia Denton, TX
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all the writing are from the past before i gave up on writing...i was never good at being a writer and no matter how i thought i never could think of anything great....
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