I knew you were the one!!!

I knew you were the one!!!

A Poem by Julia
"

it was random but it has a side meaning..i just haven't figured it out yet

"

....i can see it......



...its written all over your face...



........i don't know why you tried to hide it from me...



.....i 
already knew it from the every beginning.......



....that your the one......



...who stole my cookie....

© 2010 Julia


Author's Note

Julia
i change the name cuz i agree the title does give the end away but is the new title better?

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I don't know if it is better or not (the title), but I didn't see the ending coming. I like that. By the way did you mean "very" instead of "every"?

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hahaha, this totally made me smile. Great little write. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


He he he he, oh you tickle me. I did not see that coming. How funny.

Posted 14 Years Ago


LOL! this is Just is too Cute hehe Great work Bravo. God bless hope you have a Lovely day my friend



Posted 14 Years Ago


omg! i thought this was gonna be a love story! omg lmao i love it it was too cute!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very cute. Somehow I don't think she's talking about a cookie. How often what is stolen from us feels like a stolen cookie or special treat. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Interesting, I like this a lot, it takes you down a path of intrigue then steals away reality! lol
Awesome
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


Haha this is legit. Nice job (: And if there is an alternative meaning I'm sure that will also be awesome. Good job (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cute poem. can be either a 'just for fun' or hidden meaning write.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 24, 2010
Last Updated on August 26, 2010
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Julia
Julia

Denton, TX



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