I knew you were the one!!!
A Poem by
Julia
it was random but it has a side meaning..i just haven't figured it out yet
....i can see it......
...its written all over your face ...
........i don't know why you tried to hide it from me...
.....i already knew it from the every beginning.......
....that your the one...... ...who stole my cookie....
© 2010 Julia
Author's Note
i change the name cuz i agree the title does give the end away but is the new title better?
Reviews
I don't know if it is better or not (the title), but I didn't see the ending coming. I like that. By the way did you mean "very" instead of "every"?
Posted 14 Years Ago
Hahaha, this totally made me smile. Great little write. :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Hahaha, this totally made me smile. Great little write. :)
He he he he, oh you tickle me. I did not see that coming. How funny.
Posted 14 Years Ago
He he he he, oh you tickle me. I did not see that coming. How funny.
LOL! this is Just is too Cute hehe Great work Bravo. God bless hope you have a Lovely day my friend
Posted 14 Years Ago
LOL! this is Just is too Cute hehe Great work Bravo. God bless hope you have a Lovely day my friend
omg! i thought this was gonna be a love story! omg lmao i love it it was too cute!
Posted 14 Years Ago
omg! i thought this was gonna be a love story! omg lmao i love it it was too cute!
Very cute. Somehow I don't think she's talking about a cookie. How often what is stolen from us feels like a stolen cookie or special treat. Great job!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very cute. Somehow I don't think she's talking about a cookie. How often what is stolen from us feels like a stolen cookie or special treat. Great job!
Interesting, I like this a lot, it takes you down a path of intrigue then steals away reality! lol
Awesome
xx
Posted 14 Years Ago
Interesting, I like this a lot, it takes you down a path of intrigue then steals away reality! lol
Awesome
xx
Haha this is legit. Nice job (: And if there is an alternative meaning I'm sure that will also be awesome. Good job (:
Posted 14 Years Ago
Haha this is legit. Nice job (: And if there is an alternative meaning I'm sure that will also be awesome. Good job (:
Cute poem. can be either a 'just for fun' or hidden meaning write.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Cute poem. can be either a 'just for fun' or hidden meaning write.
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Added on August 24, 2010
Last Updated on August 26, 2010
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Author
Julia Denton, TX
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all the writing are from the past before i gave up on writing...i was never good at being a writer and no matter how i thought i never could think of anything great....
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