My Dear Lover,

a poem i wrote before my ex broke up with me...that sucked

My dear lover,
The one who saved me from myself
Who has shown me who i really am,
Who help make me who i am today
Who made me better myself
I'm so glad i found you
it was fate that has brought us together,
You will remain in my heart no matter what happens,
Yet everything i do wrong breaks and tears us apart
Please don't let me ruin such a perfect thing that we have
Forgive me...I'm still learning about the ways of love...

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

I read this with a melody floating through my mind. Great piece xx

[Anthony M Smith Jr]

Sounds like a song and a nice poem.
Light and life!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

[lamia]

beautiful , we can never learn enough about love because it can change us in so many ways ...

[heich]

ahhh...thats all i cpould say..lol

[Coyote Poetry]

A very kind and beautiful poem. Love is very hard to understand. Make us feel so good and create fear. I like the feel and emotion in your words. A excellent poem of love and thankfulness.
Coyote

[Ruth]

That is the clue, we are all learning lol There is no right or wrong, powerful poem hon
xx

[Inci]

Beautiful poetry

[Dakota]

No matter how old we get we're all still learning the ways of love.

[Angelphires]

Very cute!

[Nina Kari]

this is toooo sweet. i just LOVE the last line! it flowed well and i kjust loved reading it.