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I fell in love with a snake, not the devil

He lied his way into my mind, body and soul

I thought he loved me but I was wrong

He broke my heart, cheated and more

Every time I think of him I cry and want to cut myself up

My friends knew and tried to warn me but I ignored them

He seemed so innocent and kind that I didn’t see what he was doing

I was blinded by his beauty and his lies

Why cant I stop loving him?

When will all my pain that he caused be revenged?

Author's Note

can't think of a title (can i have alittle help or suggestions?)

Reviews

[rash]

think a little longer. analyze more. rewrite. and stop giving in to the "i am only innocent" tip of that. things happen. so, try again. and take this" sum this up and rewrite...snakes on sunless skies, the lion and his lies tried to make me a cheetah with my faith. lost today, when will my cubs again see the light?