Poor Little Girl

Poor little girl has been threw so much

Too much for a girl her age

Abused, raped, heartbroken, and more

how can she live with that on her mind?

how can she tell anyone if she trusts no one?

if she did, what would they think?

who care, they don't know

so many emotions at one time

how can she live with that on her mind?

Reviews

[KatiePie]

"how can she tell anyone if she trusts no one?" was my favorite line.
Editing:
Line 1: 'Poor little girl has been threw (>through) so much.'
Line 7: 'Who care (>cares), they wouldn't know.'
Content:
This whole piece has a beautiful flow and the emotions jump right off the page, it's obvious you know how to use your pen and that fact captures the readers eye, once reading this I really didn't want to stop. Gorgeous piece! Thank you for sharing.
-Cathrine

[creativekat]

ive been through two of three of those she could talk to me about it : )

[Ruth]

An indepth and moving write love!
Beautiful poem
xx

[Inci]

thee poem's very emotional and so is the d.p....lovely write

[nono]

AWWW PUT TEARS IN MY EYE'S!! so cute poor lil girl!

[Senseless whatever]

Interesting write. Inspires so many questions, what do we really know about those around us and the events that shaped them? How can she live? but she does. Nice job.

[Gus McFarland]

This is thought provoking, and memorable Julia. Well written. Lots of feeling.