whats left in my mind..

this is what i think when i think about the past..

after 3 loves lost in my mind is ruined by past loves and what was said..
"your a w***e"..."you were a mistake"..."you can't love anything"..
.."you'd hump anythings that moves"...and more...
all the things they've said all hurt the same everytime
they were said over and over again...
even though I'm told differently i still think its all true..
all those things were told to me my whole life
im trying to change but its so hard to do when people still tell you those things...
i want to change so badly so that i can prove to everyone that im not those things
they always says i wont but ill show them...ill show them all!!!

Author's Note

i dnt care about grammar i just started thinking and this is what i thought i know its bad so dont waste words telling me it is

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is the definition of writing, just saying what you think.

In time you will develop little "tricks" to make your writing
click for you. Little things to make it all feel better, but
right now------ You write beautifully . I love it .

Don`t change a thing until you want something changed.

Whenever I see reports of some creep telling a woman that
she is beneath him, I always want to tell her that I LOVE YOU,
just so you know how nice you are.

Somewhere , somehow, someone always wants us, even me-----
Remember that ---- Please.

-------Eagle Cruagh

[ShaneBerry]

from being with you when all of these happend i too know the pain you were feeling when these insults were tossed your way, just know that you dont have to "show them all" because they dont matter its just you, me, and our family now kit kit

[Tim H]

The pain the poem shows is palpable. It goes to show the lasting scars of verbal abuse. It is sad to me that there is a need to prove anything to others. Know it in your own heart is all the proof you'll ever need and living well is the best revenge.

[deeps]

I've been told three of those things
Some guys are just shallow and don't care
Some have a heart of gold too.
Some will just say anything to get what they want.
I like this it says so much.