Chapter 01 - The beginning of everything.

It all began a thousand years ago. When someone or something had left me a newborn in the middle of a forest now known as the Kisatchie Forest in Louisiana, I was barely born that they wanted to get rid of me. But that when a big and magnificent white female wolf with mesmerising yellow eyes saved me by hearing me cry. She took me back to her lair where she had taken care of me, fed me, kept me warm and she had given me all the affection that a mother gave to her child, she was everything a child hoped for A mother even if it was only a mere female wolf , but for me it was a mother.
One day , when I have grown to being a child , I saw her going down to the river , so I decided to follow her , hiding behind a tree I wanted to surprise her , when I came out from behind the tree what I saw surprised me , she just transformed from a white wolf to a black and beautiful human being ,by the shocks I fell on the ground causing noise that made her turns my my way , when she saw me I run as fast as I could from her but she cached me .
I don't know why but i always understood what she was saying even in her animal form , at that time I didn't really search why I could understand her I was still young so I let it go.
_Wait...ah..wait..ah..ah..I caught you...ah...let me explain this to you...it been a long time since i changed to my human form , so let go back home and then I will tell you everything...ok
_( nod )...
it true that i understood what she was saying , but I didn't know how to respond to her so I only nodded to her question , because I still didn't how to talk. So I followed her silently until we reached the lair .
_Take a seat .
I did what she told , I took a seat and waited for her to starts talking.
_Let starts with telling you my name ok...so am named "Julia Lockwood" .You already know that am not normal , i am what people call a werewolf and there are a lot of people like me in the world , and there are other species too .Vampires , beings who detains immortality and sucks human blood . The witches , people who uses formulas to make spells , and for that they need being like us or vampires to do that . There is demons too evil creatures who tries to destroy the world and angels, creatures who tries to stop the demons and serve the gods . And creatures like you , but I don't really what you are .
That time too I did not really pay attention to what she said .Then she came closer to me and held my hand ,so I looked at her face , I realized how beautiful she was ,she had green eyes, she was neither young nor old but in front of my eyes she was shinning , then she said :
_ I am so sorry dear I always wanted to tell you , I didn't really know what to talk about so I thought staying in wolf form would make you more happy... You know I can't keep calling you '"you" so I thought about finding you a name so how about "Elizabeth Lockwood" do you like it ?
_( I nod at her with a big smile ).
So I stayed there hearing her talking about her stories , she said she preferred being in her wolf form more than her human form that why she always stayed in that form . And then she talked more about vampires , werewolves and witches . After that she taught how talk , and she took me to the towns around .

Reviews

[Jerome Malenfant]

It needs some revisions in the punctuation and other things to make it clearer and more grammatical. For example, in the 2nd sentence, "When someone or something had left me a newborn in the middle of a forest", this means literally that someone gave you a newborn baby. What you mean though is: "...left me, a newborn, in the middle..."

The next phrase should be:
"I was barely born BUT they wanted to get rid of me."
And
"But THEN a big and magnificent white female wolf with mesmerising yellow eyes saved me by hearing me (or MY) cry. She took me back to her lair where she TOOK care of me, fed me, kept me warm and GAVE me all the affection that a mother GIVES to her child. SHE was everything a child COULD HOPE for: A mother. Even if it was a female wolf, for me, it was a mother."

[J.Lorentis]

Thank you it really help me