The Wings of a Dove

The Wings of a Dove

A Poem by Jules
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Cold and empty standing alone, with the help of her friends she picks up the pieces of her life and continues to strive for happiness.

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  The Wings of a Dove

 
Standing in the cold, wind whistling in my ear,
Thoughts of days gone by and of yesteryear.
Thoughts of days ahead and what life may bring,
Hope and inspiration, looking forward to spring.

A flicker of light shining way up high,
Wishing on a star as I gaze at the sky.
A star so bright and full of life,
A feeling of wanting to end all strife.

As days go by it’s not so cold,
The petals of my rose start to unfold.
Meaning and direction stare me in the face,
And I know my move is to a better place.

So thank you my friends, being there for me,
I hope you will rejoice when you see.
I am an individual and a person to love,
And fly I will upon the wings of a dove.

© 2008 Jules


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As days go by it's not so cold,
The petals of my rose start to unfold.
Meaning and direction stare me in the face,
And I know my move is to a better place.

This is just beautiful. I love the feeling of hope and moving forward that you inspire with your simple rhyming words. The rhythm is perfect, making it very easy to read, and your message comes through loud and clear. This is a great write.

Love,
Stephanie

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem tied in the wing of a dove theme well.Great poem and thanks for writing it.Many blessings,boldartist

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another perfectly floating dream delivered with words and feelings!

You keep on impressing me

All the best,
Tamer

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jules
Jules

Bristol, United Kingdom



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I have started to feel alive again, and through poetry I found a way to release emotions that can eat you alive. I have a daughter who is talented in many ways and hope that when she grows up she wil.. more..

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