"Vibrant Soul"

heartbreaking love story

Lived with my grandma because my parents ain't exists

almost never went to school until I meet this chick

she was the only one who cared, only girl i miss

through thick and thin gave me her time, kissed me with those sweet lips

I decided to give her my all when she showed me her mind

brain and body with a persona so kind,skin so soft and hair so long

you'd think shes a model her walk so elegant yet her style so casual

her smile is a breath of fresh air, that confidence makes everyone stare 

feeling her from inside and out, she was always warm and wet had me busting out

we would talk for hours,I regret never giving her flowers

she  stopped calling, I asked her mamma what I do wrong she told me soft spoken "honey she got a call from the gods"

I cried all morning sat alone all night, why her? Someone so humble with a future so bright

bought a suit wiped my tears,got her white roses she didn't speak or shine with her bright eyes

 I swear she smiled I heard her heart beat vibrate through my body when the soil darkened her past life

baby you're in a better place no more pain or sorrows.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Compelling and enjoyable read. Well done!

[Soul Poetic]

thank you.