"Sweet love"

passionate love

 To every beginning there is an end

lets be infinite,never end

your kisses make love to my lips, 

your hands caress my hips

your eyes tell a story that I cant stop reading

forgive my obsession 

but you are a blessing

 I dream of that figure over mines

Never have i trust a man, 

I know your lips speak no lies

our love feels forbidden, seems to good to be realistic

those other girls are just practice

 baby for you ill go through measures that are drastic

You fed my soul happiness

 I will honor the day I take your last name

I get high off your smile, addicted to your tongue it speaks desire

when we make love I swear I never want it to end

you hold me down,only reason I'm sane, 

I never felt love this pure

you always leave me wanting more 

being in your arms I feel safe

 never want our love to fade 

our relationship is pure grace.

Author's Note

What you think?

Reviews

[endo rush]

All this needs is a hit melody. nice.

[Leigh]

I can feel the passion in this, very enjoyable

[Steve]

Definitely sounds like a sweet love song. Very nice.

[BAKANO A. M.]

Perfectly presentable piece!
Love it,Sensual S.!

Your poem reminds me of my work:
MISSION TO PLUTO!

KEEP PAINTING POETICALLY,S. S. !

[Soul Poetic]

thank you