Outer Rom
Inner Ram,
Storage full
Power out,
Revival now,
Consistency
Is what I need
To live and win,
Transparent hands
Ache subsides,
Straying in her healing land
Thou should hear her mighty rumble,
Lo, am comforted!
Refreshed again,
Halleluya!
halle-music!
My heart attest
Within indeed!
The brain massager
Is replayed
When life is getting on my nerves.
I truly enjoyed this poem, many of the lines stuck out to me as insightful and interesting, particularly lines 9-16. I tried to interpret what this poem was about and the conclusion I conjured was that the poem reflects upon being troubled or even depressed, but there's still a glimmer of reason or hope present. I'm not sure if that was your intent, that's just my interpretation. This poem is very well crafted and enjoyable, nice work.
I truly enjoyed this poem, many of the lines stuck out to me as insightful and interesting, particularly lines 9-16. I tried to interpret what this poem was about and the conclusion I conjured was that the poem reflects upon being troubled or even depressed, but there's still a glimmer of reason or hope present. I'm not sure if that was your intent, that's just my interpretation. This poem is very well crafted and enjoyable, nice work.