Autumn Nights Radiate

Simply floating in my head.

 

When you feel the sudden chill of the day’s sun at night,

And you lookup to the sky while the moon warms your face,

You can see through the clouds as the beam radiates.

Radiates.

You remember the might when everything was so right,

But the one who was with you was a dream of helpless fate,

You can see yourself so small in it all

Wondering if there was some relief

No, No, No, Not at all.

And you look up to the sky,

While the moon warms your face,

You can see through the clouds,

As the beam radiates

Radiates.

Was that you remembered?

Or can it be,

Someone else is walking by?

You can’t recall, not at all.

Does wind really soar?

Or do the waves crash in?

Is there really a sound of silence?

Can angels really fly?

While the moon warms your face,

The world to see is something.

To hold is your own memory,

Or endure nothing at all.

And then you were there.

 

- Mom (J. M. Cox - Rouse) © 7/2009

Reviews

[SM Davis]

SISTER SUNSHINE!!!! What a fabulous piece! Have missed your writing...and YOU.

But the one who was with you was a dream of helpless fate,You can see yourself so small in it allWondering if there was some reliefNo, No, No, Not at all.And you look up to the sky,While the moon warms your face,You can see through the clouds,As the beam radiates

Such a beautiful wistfulness...perhaps pondering in the above lines. Well done!!!

[Michael X]

such beautiful, enchanting imagery. i love the wisping feeling of a seashore autumn.
you capture the feeling lively, and with perfect passion.

[KisuKimmi]

I like it ^_^