Good Lines

Just a thing - I have to add it's "not" about a love in my life.

what do i do

i haven't slept

i haven't ate

all i do is think of you

 

i hear your sound

read your words

the message you left

makes my heart pound

 

i'm looking 'round

here it comes

someone's got that box

of lost and found

 

my mind's screaming loud

you're only reading

you're only reading

the good lines

 

one more take

i see your face

i read your note

there's no mistake

 

my mind screams loud

you're only reading

you're only reading

the good lines

 

i looking 'round

here it comes

someone's got the box

of lost and found

 

i read your note

there's  no mistake

there's only good lines

there's only good lines

Author's Note

5 minutes of thought.

Reviews

[E. A. Fielder]

Someone has left you a not about some sort of news but you don't know whether to take it as good news or bad. AH HA! It's about being published isn't it? This one was a bit of a challenge for me. I like that. I will be enjoying a lot of your work in the future, I know it! Keep Writing!

[SM Davis]

Judy, this is beautiful. I see only the good lines in you, but can totally understand the emotion that strings these words. You're perfect!