echoes

For Creative Poetry.

Tabla beat
hear the rhythm.

Triumphant
rise unto heav'n.

Abandon all
the nano-cares.

Freedom sought
found and shared.

Author's Note

New Words: freedom, abandon, nano, tabla, triumphant

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

very nice

[Nobody.]

very nice little poem. the rhythm ans vocab are both effective. Lights up the sky like a comet, and, then, it's gone again, leaving that childish longing that it didn't end so quickly. Lovely read.

Cheers!

[Kenneth The Poet]

A criss-cross trip of awesome across interesting vocabulary choices. Love the last lines the best.

[The Analog Kid]

Love the "Abandon all/the nano cares." Very creative:) Nice rhythm to this short piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wow. In this short poem. Used all the words. I like the strength and desire of the poem also. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote