Faith Eclipsed

For Creative Poetry

Eclipse-cast 

shadows

decimate the subservient.

Ravishing their belief

of the Sun God.

Impression of loss

on each 

upturned face

obscures once 

resonant voices

of joy.

Voracious fear

gnaws

at the 

faithful.

Author's Note

8.20.11 Words Given: Subservient. Resonant. Decimate. Ravishing. Eclipse. Obscure. Voracious. Impression.

Reviews

[KAREN]

Excellent use of the words! Told a intresting story which I enjoyed reading.