Vengeance Pursued

For Creative Poetry

With arrow and quiver
a voluptuous maiden
gave chase to her captor.

The b*****d who
contrived to subjugate
her to his will.

He only succeeded in
imprinting a flame
of hatred
within her tender heart.

And with ambrosial lust
she pursues
his destruction.
Indulging her
need to exact
vengeance.

Author's Note

8.14.11 Words: Flame. Imprint. Quiver. Arrow. Pursue. Contrive. Subjugate. Ambrosial. Voluptuous. Indulgent.

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

love the imagery...

[Samuel Dickens]

Great job of using those words. Seems that captor will get the point.

[Audrey Howitt]

Nicely done Judy! It is great to see a slightly darker side of you!

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

This has a lotta big words but hey dig the chick with the bow and arrow kinky but hey whats a little pain
Now when they break out a car battery and some jumper cables thats going a little to far and it leaves scars dam girl scouts you swipe a few boxes of cookies and they go all medievil on your a*s

But hey really good write my friend now im off to play in traffic im kidding i gotta go pick up my wife schools almost out
And this has been your moment of Gonzo

Stay crazy Judy

[Lily Mae]

You used these words well and made me want to be vicious for a bit there.. wear those shoes:) xx

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wow excellent incorporation seems jsut so beautiful and just love it :)

[Richielee]

nicely worked poem,you have a knack of weaving words within your words without them sticking out like a sore thumb,oh and you swore! haha b*****d! hehe love your writings Judy cos they always have an undercurrent of happiness and contentment even if not obvious at first : )

[Kenneth The Poet]

Sweet!

[NightShade]

Stare over long at Artemis with desire and She will treat it as an affront. An ancient theme, well worded and made anew! I really enjoy watching as people take the Eternal archetypes and continue to breathe Life into them. Well done!