Dear Commoner:

For Creative Poetry

Please note:

The avid
adamance
with which
you hold
to your covenant
of being gauche
can only
addle
the mind
of
every
socialite
to
come in
contact
with you.

Sincerely,
The Elite

Author's Note

6.3.11 Words: Gauche. Covenant. Avid. Adamance. Note. Addle.

Reviews

[Chris]

I used to play with the plastic boxed kitchen magnetic words. The refridgerator looked strange with layers of my scribbles flowing cross the surfaces. The hardest thing was destroying a 'treasure' to make a new one... but I did. You have heart, courage, wit, can communicate and organize. Its time to be promptless and for YOUR words to be heard... and I look forward to it!

[Audrey Howitt]

Clever, clear and concise. I loved the voice and the wit.

[Tasha]

I liked how you used the words Judy. Great job.

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend Judy,
I think three words are key to this poem, adamance, gauche and addle. This poem reminded me of a bumper sticker I once read that stated, “Those of you who think you know everything are annoying to those of us who do”!
I shall reword this in Alaskaeze. “Kindly Bear In Mind, Those of you who refuse to change your mind holding to your pledge of unsophisticatedness only discombobulate every Alaskan that comes into exposure with you! Sincerely The Nobility”.
Well looking at my version I have to say yours looks much more Elitism! I think I shall stick with my dog musher vocabulary that has a few strange words and a couple not proper to list here.
I liked your poem and it made me smile. Listed are the definitions to the three key words.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

adamant |ˈadəmənt|
adjective
refusing to be persuaded or to change one's mind.
DERIVATIVES
adamance |ˈødəməns| noun
adamancy |-mənsē| |ˈødəmənsi| noun
adamantly |ˈødəməntli| adverb

gauche |gō sh |
adjective
lacking ease or grace; unsophisticated and socially awkward.

addle |ˈadl|
verb [ trans. ] chiefly humorous
make unable to think clearly; confuse.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like how you used the words and wrote this as a note.

[Ben Taylor]

You fit those words into a very small amount of space :p
Nice.
Interesting format, also. A letter in poetic form--unique.

[Richielee]

hah! great oh wonderful Judy!

[Joel M Frye]

Dear Elite:

I have lived amongst you incognito for years...I guess I pass.

Signed,
More Common Than You Will Ever Know.

LOL...great job, Judy.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

This uncommon commoner really enjoyed your poem. Awesome wordplay, becoming a true accounting of how it really is out there.

Wonderful writing!