Intrigue

For Creative Poetry

Mysterious intrigue
disturbs serenity.

Palpable tensions
orbit the suspects.

Detection
lending purpose
to each clue
in its remoteness.

Another truth
discovered by an
investigator's mind
within
the extension
of evidence.

And finally,
Justice served
by
the
Judge's
inclination.

Author's Note

5.19.11 Words:

Serenity. Extension. Orbit. Inclination. Palpable. Intrigue. Remoteness.

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Very well done! I really like what you did with the chosen words too! I really like this poem.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Excellent word use ; )

[quinfinn]

oh, i love this. thought of agatha christie's poirot while reading for some reason...
hmm... anyway, wonderful write!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

You did a fine job with the words Judy. Isn't it amazing how we come up with different tales using the same words.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like how you used these words to come up with a poem about murder mystery. You have done well creating this and the story in this poem is one that I can follow and has me reading till the very end.

[Pebbles]

brilliant judy :)

[Richielee]

very well done to include them difficult words Judy, how do i go about getting involved in these challenges?