I suppose you could say it is morning, sigh....

I suppose you could say it is morning, sigh....

A Story by Judy Ponceby
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Picture if you will two people starting their day....

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"Good Morning!"
With a smile.
             "Humpf"
             With a frown.

"Look at that sunshine!"
With joyful glee.
             "Harumpf"
             With determined grouchiness.

"Coffee's on!"
Happily oblivious.
             "Grrrr."
             Having not had said bringer of life as yet.

"Hey! Let's go for a run!"
Grinning wildly.
             **Fearsome glare**
             with unbelieving look upon the face.

"No? A walk?"
Slightly less cheerily.
             **Ferocious silence**
             with intermittent grumbled mumblings.

"Umm..see you later?"
Taking leave.
             **Slow smile spreading across face**
             Mission Accomplished.

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


Author's Note

Judy Ponceby
In honor of one of those ungodly annoying cheery morning wishers!! :)
You know who you are, Fill. :D

Photo courtesy PDPhoto.org

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THAT WAS CUTE. And very nicely written.
And I kind of laughed.
I'm a cheery morning person, who starts the day by screaming in joy. :D I see what you think of my people...we will now RUIN YOUR MORNINGS FOREVER.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Happy and energetic people make us quiet and peaceful morning people wish for silence. A very entertaining poem. Some mornings I try to talk to wife. I get the hand and request for no talking. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I found this disturbingly cute. For some reason it reminds me of my mother and me in the morning! As soon as she leaves I get so much happier and a slow smile definitely creeps across my face. That smile, is the smile of freedom =] Haha! Loved it.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


gotta love this one judy. one of the funny lil truths in life. cheers :)

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Judy, this poem is really cute. I think that's because we all recognize this guy. We all know him/her very well. I'm normally the irritable, morose person you write about and it still made me smile. It is very entertaining. One more observation: The reader can easily identify with either character in your poem. That fact makes the poem somewhat universally appealing. Write more like it.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


LOl, those morning blues ; )

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Posted 13 Years Ago


I swear, I'm not the least bit cheery--practically ever!
Very amusing and artfully done.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


hahahaha.....jolly judy strikes again! i really loved this....and i recognise it too!! u made me laugh with this one. i'm always grateful for that. excellent!!!

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Posted 13 Years Ago



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