B

Bumbling Bumble
Buzzing busily between
Big bold Buttercups.

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

absolutely brilliant! I love the alliterations.. I always get thrilled by them for some reason. This is a beautiful Haiku as well :)

[Sel Whiteley]

What craft, to write a haiku all in B. This is so fun and vivid. Delightful!

[FJ Davis]

So sweet as to be dripping nectar! Alliteration and the bee's actual sound buzzing about. Gather up these potent little sense-enticers for your eventual book, Judysan.

I like the playfulness of this one. you never fail to amuse readers. :)

[Ben Taylor]

Nice title :)
B..Bee.
It goes both ways :)
Very clever.
And the poem itself is also pretty dang amazing.
As is the majority of your other Haiku/Lune/Tanka :)

[Tommy]

Watch out for their sting
Trading nectar for beauty
This flower's sweet knight

You have a knack for the Haiku; I love it!
Great Write Judy!
RLG,
Tommy

[Arabdha]

Beautifully Boisterous..;)