Heartbreak

A lune...

Shattering crystal
soul shining
sadly in starkness.

Reviews

[blakjassy]

This is lovely... sweet and sad

[Brad Nugent]

Lovely. Poems that are so brief, yet convey so much emotion and intensity --- well, isn't that what poetry is about. Well done.

[Lily Mae]

Sharp ..crisp images...xx I can see it in my minds eye...xo

[Sel Whiteley]

Wow, that was a shock. Very emotive, particularly the last line and masterfully reinforced by the "sadly in starkness."

[Hatchling]

Perfect beyond words!! :D

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

The heart is so delicate, beautiful poem Judy.

[Eiken]

Judy, this is beautiful. Wonderful images