By the moon

A lune form poem...

Silver knighted moon
Shining fair
Upon sweet lovers.

Reviews

superb imagery. expressive.

[Ben Taylor]

"Knighted". What an interesting adjective to use describing the moon.
This is very well done; you managed to convey a sense of love, as well as give whatever connotations "knight" gives (lol) to the moon :)

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

This a poem that blesses the soul my friend.