Wings

Fluttering by....

Wings delicately
Waft on warm winds winding west
With grace and beauty

Author's Note

This would be my first ever attempt at a haiku. Please feel free to critique. :)

Photo courtesy PDPhoto.org

Reviews

[Sel Whiteley]

Love the alliteration of w in this, really gives you the feeling of flight. Can't believe this was your first haiku. What an innate gift you must have for them.

[FJ Davis]

Because I used to eat at a Japanese restaurant, I'm practically an expert on highcoos.
For what it's worth, I think your haiku projects a lovely delicacy. Looks like the genuine article to me.

[Ben Taylor]

I just wrote my first haiku tonight too!! Although I like yours more than I enjoy my own. I like it :) I love having a picture painted for me in just 17 syllables :D

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Judy I am not well versed in poetic forms but this is a haiku.. and
It says much ..Butterflies , graceful and free and free beauty for all- very nice haiku~

Chloe