Watch Your Print

Watch Your Print

A Poem by JudeTrain
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Something of another

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Topple about the moor

Hood still filled with cure

Lets feel, lets feel

Quick, ditch the ground

 

Here see the menthol

Conceal the broken pencils

that's it that's it

What do we do now?

 

Panic through conclusions

Hands full of knots

Walls walls

You blinked, I win

catch the drift?

ever off

 

 

Actuating my freak grimace

Controlling thoughts that shouldn’t be

On my tongue

 

Paying attention to how the stories pivot,

Because its getting really interesting to

Watch how everything’s done

 

 

You're talking so fast see,

You're fumbling your thoughts, see

Wrong word, wrong word

There ya go I’ve gotcha

 

Because honestly I know that’s not what you meant

But it is convenient for my argument

 

 

Stuck inside a light bulb

Strumming in my head

Losing all my senses

My feet have turned to lead

 

These people keep on passing

Their faces smeared with red

As long as they keep quiet

We’ll keep their faces fed

© 2010 JudeTrain


Author's Note

JudeTrain
'Ring around the rosy...' nah?
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An interesting write for sure. I read this three times, and I think I got a little something different out of it each time. There are a lot of metaphors in this piece, or at least I created a lot of them when I read it. Can't say as I really know where it led, but I enjoyed the journey.

Four stanzas from the bottom: "Your" to "You're" or "you are"

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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An interesting write for sure. I read this three times, and I think I got a little something different out of it each time. There are a lot of metaphors in this piece, or at least I created a lot of them when I read it. Can't say as I really know where it led, but I enjoyed the journey.

Four stanzas from the bottom: "Your" to "You're" or "you are"

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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JudeTrain
JudeTrain

Yuma, AZ



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I was born in Spokane Washington on November 9th, and have been writing ever since... ahem, i usually carry a composition book for random thoughts, or even for short stories. I'd like to say I started.. more..

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