The Whackness

Its just a poem I wrote after watching the movie.

 

It was all a dream

Waling around high on ecstasy

And I have a funny feeling people

Are following me

 

I’m struggling hard

Making the pain apart of me

I tremble in my sleep

Dreaming of the good old days

Of when it was you and me

And now I have dreams

That you come back and hold me

My mind plays tricks on me

 

The worlds full of a******s

And it’s hard not to be one

But sometimes being who are

Is like playing the beat to a drum

 

I ain’t mad at the people

Who walked away from me

Everyone comes and goes

And sometimes you need

To just live no matter what

You need to grow from a seed

Into a tree independent and free

 

But sometimes I wonder

Who made the world?

And why they put me on it

And how come I have these funny feelings

Of never knowing if living or dying

Is worth it to me

 

Sometimes I cry because

I just need to let it go

And sometimes it needs to show

Wearing your heart on your sleeve

Just shows your vulnerability

And weakness for others

 

Maybe I’ll wake up

From these dreams

And stop my mind

From playing tricks on me

The whackness

Is who I came to be.

 

Reviews

[poemprincess]

This is awesome. very true and real hahaha I forgot I already read and reviewed this one but anyway shows you how smart I am. Still a good job

[Taylor H]

this is a great peom. i like the theme and the flow of it. i do see some grammar errors in the first stanza that made is harder to read but i really like this. im adding it to my library.

[poemprincess]

You are a really talented writer! This is a wonderful poem. Good Job!!!