Obey

Submit

Fasten the cold steel around her neck

Correct her for her boorish conjecture 

Textured in leather

Lecture whether you should

Torture with feathers

Pleasurable pain feigned with sighs of angst

She deserves to be spanked

With her ankles tied to planks 

Spit in her face

Call her a skank

Blanket her with passion

Rationalize your lascivious actions

Tell her it is for the sake of God 

Do you want to burn in Hell forever?

How clever

Promise me you will worship my c**k. 

Shocked that your rebel savior is mocked

Unlock her chastity belt

Her svelte physique is unique 

I felt around and took a peek

Licked her cheeks

And kissed her peach

I shall be forgiven 

I am your priest

OBEY

Reviews

[dartanyon jonez]

Nice flow and rhymes; it was easy to read it to a beat (in my head). Interesting. I'm going to check into some more of your work.

[613]

Well . . . this is certainly graphic! Haha.

Not necessarily my go-to for reading; but as a writer, you did a fantastic job. Everything meshed together so well. Nice work!

[Mescaline Butterfly]

Thanks for your review! Yea, I prefer to compose works that are along the lines of taboo or edgy. I try to be illustrious as possible to evoke certain vibes while maintaining an artistic style.

Oh and cheers to our newly formed amistad 😉☺

[613]

You're welcome! Despite the "taboo" content you write about, I actually look forward to reading more from you! :D