Oh, Dee

Thinking about my friend. ..

Only 17 years old
I fed her disassociatives
Invited her to my abode
How inappropriate
Opiate scars decorate her arms
Alarmingly volatile
Suicide attempt
She's in the hospital
Docile little f**k toy
Don't die on me
Worship my black dick
Like religious idolatry
I tried a lot to free you with my magic powder
Pulverized plant matter scattered
For this tragic hour
Devour the smoke from the sorcerer's wand
I wanna bone, Get stoned
Rip a page from the Qur'an
Abscond, Honey, don't OD on me
Cold lips bubbling froth
She succumbs slowly
Her cute face on the carpet
I hope she's not dead
Oh, Dee

Reviews

[Nightfeather]

I can feel that these events are real, for the emotions are coming from the core of your heart. A friend is one of the most important things in the life of a human being. She is bounded by the threads of her past and needs someone to release her from her painful existence but suicide is not an option. She needs to reconstruct her clouded mind by letting it purge with the help of a friend. You can cut the threads of her past and show her a world that does not revolve around violence, sadness and drugs. Show her things that only you can show. Love is the most powerful weapon on this world. Violence is for the weak, love is for the strong. I am in no place to tell you what to do but this poem has grabbed my attention for I don't want her and your lives to be sad. So if you find her, or already found her, try to make her happy and tell her that it is not to late to reverse the tides of fate.

I like your writing, good job :D

[ANTO]

Dear God MB - this is powerfully descriptive and emotional writing and must have been very difficult to compose. I dont know what to say except that I hope things worked/work out for the best.

[Mescaline Butterfly]

Yea, it's idk.. it's kinda amazing that you can feel the emotion I tried to convey for this is real; like a live stream of events transpiring in my life interpreted through literary art. Yea - this young woman I recently met, initiated a friendship based on some shared concurrent tribulations, very sexual flirting, and drug use, called me from hospital a few days ago; suicide attempt. She endures an abusive family, but she's so intelligent and fun. Her mobile is disconnected. Not sure where she lives. Idk hope shes ok. Thanks for your empathy.

[ANTO]

May I PM you ?

[Mescaline Butterfly]

Of course. I do not mind.