Perfection replaced by potential...

Life can seem to be extremly short when youre soul is intrigued by the differences everyone else has to offer you and monotonously wonderful when the long haul you've had has turned out habitually happy.

Restless mind wanders and schemes up scenarios, leave it all behind start fresh, a new world full of potential will make you happy...

Your instincts tell you different, the stability that has never failed you gives you peace of mind, nothing is wrong so why try to right it?

Dilemas stray in and out of your life but your choices will always be reminiscent in the path you chose. The world is brimming with cruel lust, the soul is weak with the desire to love blindly and your selections will never fail to hurt more than just yourself...

 I thought of your amazing smile and I smiled, I thought of your wonderful laugh and I felt good inside, I thought of the sultriness that you exude when you look at me in that special way and it made me lust for your voluptuous figure.

 My heart yearns for your happiness, my mind craves for more of your intellect and my body throbs with the desire to make love to you in such a passionate way that when you make love to someone else you'll know the difference and think of me...

               ...My sentiments are truth even if my actions speak lies...

                                     ...Always...

Reviews

[Laura E. Aranda]

This piece was so unique I just had to ask you to be my friend...that is why I ask you to 'add' me. Ha! I would like for you to come by and read my work...that is another reason why I ask you to 'add' me. Since you ask for an explanation there are too!. ...I think, by what I have read so far, you are a good writer......cheers,lea

Hope to hear from you! :)

[Suki]

holy freakin crap bro. this is AWESOME. i love love love it. and the ending is the besticles maaaan. you rocked my socks with this!!

[Nansi London]

My. That, was refreshing. Lol a bit stunt with words on this one but i guess the best way to to describe this poem after a read and understnding of it is that its like a full course meal. Everything was there; from appetizer to after dinner mints and coffee. Way beyond desert. I enjoyed its many levels and how crystal clear your reason and emotions were. Simply delicious. Thank you fro reading my poem, I thought it only fair to return the favor...and it was worth every word...

nansi

[Jacqueline Lopez]

Hey, I see you edited your poem today. It brings a smile to my face. I love the lines I thought of your amazing smile and I smiled, I thought of your wonderful laugh and I felt good inside....
But I LOVE the one my body throbs with the desire to make love to you in such a passionate way that when you make love to someone else you'll know the difference and think of me... You're the man, my love!

[Jacqueline Lopez]

Juan, you're awesome. Your writing style and the way you put your words together. Cool!

[MagiCrystal]

A poem.. of lust and desire .. cynical looks and pack with amazing desire..
I love it..

[justjenn_2u]

You have style of your own and this is definitive of a real poet/writer.

I can relate to the line where you speak of a restless mind...... (Interesting point you bring up here). Seems also that an idle mind will leave room for temptation, just as the saying goes.

You have a deep thought pattern here and it spills on the page.

I love the closure - My sentiments are truth even if my actions speak lies. Wouldn't it be a dream if our sentiments could be our actions? Good write!

[Snape]

I love it. Nice writing style.

[Seracies]

I like how it went beyond the self-centered desires and went into wanting something so desperately for someone else, that that happiness, although not your own, would be enough.
I liked it a lot.

[Kiddx]

The world is brimming with cruel lust, the soul is weak with the desire to love blindly and your selections will never fail to hurt more than just yourself...

like these lines in your story, this is a passionate and beuatiful write.

[J.P. Bristow]

This is heartbreaking...yet lovely. I like the flow of this work as it rains with emotion. I think people who have released love in this fashion-so that it may flourish- to sacrifice ones own personal happiness for anothers is in fact the definition of true love.

Wonderful.
-Jules