Scenario...

Scenario...

A Story by Juan

Visual reminders of how delicate our physical form can be,when sliced with a blade of grass or jabbed with a piece of glass..These flesh wounds merge with thick dry crevices to form these husky little fingers that prior to this momentary glance had a tingling sensation running through them...a numbness now replaces it..My attention is now drawn else where,from my ashy finger tips to my anemic palm, I continue to work my way up...Once occupied with infant soft skin..long eclectic markings of dry blood adorn my tender area....Random pins and needles surface on my flesh, My eyes drift in a sea of tears,while my eye lids are weighed down by anchors of fatigue....A few cracked scabs trickle the remnants of my soulless plasma away...A coward?, A sinner?, An act of haste painfully realized?....A shameless smile overwhelms my purgatory state..My calm deep breaths now manifest into a soft wheezing stutter before slowly coming to a stand still relieving the world of my vain....selfish....pain inducing existence....

 
 
 

© 2008 Juan


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hummm.... a Total darkness.. and a creepy thoughts.. very enticing..!

Posted 14 Years Ago


i love the description and imagery in this short and simplistic story. It is truly breathtaking.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on June 24, 2008
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Juan
Juan

Greenfield, WI



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Some find it disturbing, some find it amusing others are indifferent when they realize that my writing has a bit of fact to it..generally from my own experiences. Most importantly I'd like to say "I w.. more..

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A Story by Juan