Your Skeleton

Your Skeleton

A Poem by Y.F.
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Finding something that changes everything.

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I've found him in the closet,
alone, covered in dust.
I took him out and talked to him,
I tried to gain his trust.

At first he didn't say much,
so modest and so shy,
then wished he had some guts to spill
as he began to cry.

I took him out for dinner
and then I've payed the bill -
He made me think of all the things
that seemed before so real.

We both then sunk in sadness,
our minds turned gelatin.
I woke to find us both in bed -
Me and your skeleton.

© 2010 Y.F.


Author's Note

Y.F.
I didn't find any better rhyme for skeleton. If you have any suggestions, I'd be happy to hear them.

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YS is filled w/humor but points out that we're more than JUST flesh & bone. Skeletons are our backbone but our emotions are the building blocks of character... I loved the the image of guts spilling out of skeletons & minds turning into gelatin.. And that rhyme fits perfectly...
Unless you wanna add a bird ref. Pelican (haha)...
GBU

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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YS is filled w/humor but points out that we're more than JUST flesh & bone. Skeletons are our backbone but our emotions are the building blocks of character... I loved the the image of guts spilling out of skeletons & minds turning into gelatin.. And that rhyme fits perfectly...
Unless you wanna add a bird ref. Pelican (haha)...
GBU

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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