Humpty Dumphobic

Humpty Dumphobic

A Poem by Y.F.
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Written for the "what if" contest

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Humpty Dumpty was afraid of the wall.

 

Humpty Dumpty was afraid he shell fall.

 

All the king's men and the best of his shrinks

 

Couldn't put Humpty Dumpty back on the bricks.

© 2008 Y.F.


Author's Note

Y.F.
I guess sometimes a phobia could be a good thing. ;)

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Definetly a good thing in his case. But all in all I'd still say he's a good egg. LOL Bad pun. I know. Good write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Interesting heh heh heh. The old nursery rhyme originated from my hometown, so its interesting for me to see a new twist put upon it. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enjoyed this little piece. Put a little twist to the original Humpty Dumpty. Lots of luck!

~*Anna Rose*~

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Do not disturb me, I'm already disturbed. ;)



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