Tears of Tomorrow

Tears of Tomorrow

A Poem by Y.F.
"

Savior the moment. don't think too far ahead.

"

When I find myself smile

every once in a while

the moment goes by in a flash

When tomorrow comes

or night it becomes

this smile might be found in the trash

 

Replaced by tears,

shadows and fears,

while this smile I again can not borrow

but now at the scene

no one knows what I mean

when I mention the tears of tomorrow

 

Why must I spoil

this product of toil

by thinking of what lies ahead

while people rejoice

laugh out in loud voice

I busy myself with this dread

 

it's hard to ignore

what I've done before

but I don't have to mix joice with sorrow

Now with this smile

I enjoy for a while

and forget about tears of tomorrow

© 2008 Y.F.


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Great writing friend! It is so true - we must do our best to forget about tears, shadows and fears and not let the tears of tomorrow cloud our view of the present. It can be difficult at times and you illustrate this struggle perfectly. This piece has a calm soothing rhythm and pace. I think the unpretentious language gives it a honest and very likeable tone. I also admire your dedication to the rhyme scheme throughout. It works beautifully.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Lovely writing, serious tone, beautifully worded, flowed nicely, rather much as today flows into tomorrow and so on. Beautiful poem, once again, adding to favourites.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great writing friend! It is so true - we must do our best to forget about tears, shadows and fears and not let the tears of tomorrow cloud our view of the present. It can be difficult at times and you illustrate this struggle perfectly. This piece has a calm soothing rhythm and pace. I think the unpretentious language gives it a honest and very likeable tone. I also admire your dedication to the rhyme scheme throughout. It works beautifully.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I gave you 200 points and when I clicked on the rate it went down to one hundred my friend. I did the same the last time and I rated it 200 also. Something wrong somewhere? Anne.xxx

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great sincerity and wonderful imagery. Yes my friend I truly enjoyed all in "Tears Of Tomorrow". smiles.
Annexxx


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great piece. I can really relate to it. Nice write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This sounds a lot like the life of a bipolar, i.e. me and probably a dozen more people in this world. liked this write.


Great Write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome write. I never know what the day may bring, tears or smiles. Enjoy the smile today!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awwwwww this is very moving piece... it really shows the softer side of you... i love it ... great job!!!! :o)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah, to live in the moment.....what a true treasure.

I like this poem, as it reads smoothly and carries a reminder of just that --- enjoy your smile today because tomorrow it may be replaced by tears.

Very nicely done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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