Life as a Blur

Life as a Blur

A Poem by Y.F.
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Does the past really matter?

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As I look at my past, it seams like a blur

a smudge of bare life, where nothing occurs

What is the meaning of what lies ahead?

Should I try even more? Am I better off dead?

 

Have I passed my peak? Was a peak really there?

If I'm happy right now, then why should I care?

It is only a fool who sees life as a race

All that matters in life is the smile on my face.

© 2008 Y.F.


Author's Note

Y.F.
Written for the "Goes by in a blur" contest.
Bring on the challenges Mejasha! :)

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This is profound and makes one think; very philosophical. The title fits this cool piece ;-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. It reads like a mantra. I think I'll have to file this one in my favorites. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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