Self Destructive Weakness

This one goes out to all the girls who felt weak, and as if they have no power to protest a wrong done to them.

As I look in your eyes

I can smell all your lies

at least be honest

when you say your goodbyes

 

"It's not working out"

a convincing excuse

just tell me the truth

you have nothing to loose

 

I know all about her

your Mistress, your b***h

she wants you for herself

so you've decided to ditch

 

You forgot all about

the nights in my bed

and forgot all about

all the things you have said

 

"You are my angel

my sweet, my divine

as I look in your eyes

forever your mine"

 

I've known now for weeks

you've been fooling around

but I couldn't dare make

even the most silent of sounds

 

You know I am weak

and I know that as well

but without you I'm stronger

so just go to hell.

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

This piece had a conveying message. Just one question, did you mean angel in the phrase - You are my angle. I just wanted to point it out in case. All in all, this poem does describe how it feels to be used and for someone to just throw memories away, very well. I only want to point out the one word I found, so your poem would be perfect.

[Forest Green]

Wow...what a parallel. Very good summary of one decision leading to another and another.

Yes, it makes me realize there is a commonality in that summary statement.

Good work!

Daniel

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

great write!

thanks for submitting to my contest!

[Tania Leigh]

Nice rant! I like that in the last stanza the speaker knew that although she was weak, she was stronger without him, and the last line is classic :-)

[Lia]

Beautiful piece. Very powerful. Thank you xx

[Poeticpiers]

Bitter sweet triumph. You win although you have lost.