Who am I?

Who am I?

A Poem by Y.F.
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Some things are better left unsaid.

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Who am I? I'm no one special,

Not an angel, Not a devil.

I just try to live my life,

Avoid the sharp end of the knife.

 

Like everyone, I too feel sorrow,

But I'd like to see tomorrow,

In the hope the world will change -

So much anger, so much rage.

 

Who am I? I'm nothing new,

Just a person, just like you.

The only difference is - I care,

Care enough to do, to dare.

 

Like everyone, I live right here,

Yet I'll never live in fear.

When problems come I'll stand my ground,

Never leave what I have found.

 

Who am I? I'm just a voice,

For you as I too have a choice.

So join the cause - help stop the lie,

Just please don't ask me who am I.

© 2008 Y.F.


Author's Note

Y.F.
I'd like to hear what you think this piece is about.
Lets see if you can get it right.
If you have other comments - they're welcome, as always.

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Let me start by saying I really liked the rhyming scheme you put together here while delivering powerful thoughts.
It starts off sounding like a person who doesn't like things but doesn't want to get dragged into the fight. But then later in the poem they sound almost miltant, like they were burned once too often and now want not only to do something about it themselves but also are trying to instill those values in others.

Great work.

Dave

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I love it. I absolutely love it. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This piece is great - I admire those with the courage to write honest writes such as this. Excellent.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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