Storing Seconds
A Poem by J.L.R
and the moments
they just dance right by
like particles of dust
through my curtains
leaking amber
not in linear travel
but flowing
like water
breath to wind on waves
the way from a distance
it is all one lifeline
of foamy white
but up close
there is a glitter
racing through
individual fractions
of droplet mist
these are the seconds
I can’t count
or keep track of
at all
they just hang there
in the background
my oxygen supply
we should always have
memories like these
in our pantries
on our shelves
waiting to be dusted
for release
© 2016 J.L.R
Reviews
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Dust floating through sunbeams is a magical image for me. I have an early memory of it.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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oh, you are so good...please come be my friend
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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most of all i enjoyed the concept and the message of it... a very good reminder of how time passes from us... ending was lovely too...
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Time does indeed flow like water. With no impediments it will pass faster than we can ever know. And yet, the hands are always so still.
Nicely written J.L.R
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
Beautiful words, thank you!
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Added on March 14, 2016
Last Updated on March 14, 2016
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J.L.RBaltimore, MD
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