this paper thin world.

this paper thin world.

A Poem by JohnPate.

stare out my window till the day fades.

now, tell me your thoughts decayed

 

swim slowly through my ocean

now, tell me why my words weaken

 

put the weight of my world on your shoulders

now, tell me that im just one for your liers

 

and so, my curtains will slide shut to forget

my ocean will drain from its tearduct exit

 

and for now this weight will be uplifted

till i awake and again realize i've bin cheated

© 2008 JohnPate.


Author's Note

JohnPate.
i know its another dumb one.

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I love this poem! The meaning of it so closely relates to what I write that it seems as though I'm reading something I wrote. Great work!

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JohnPate.
JohnPate.

jeffersonville, IN



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John Pate is my name. I enjoy eating and cooking. To me music is a necessity to life. I have found that I very much like poetry. My friends, i try to keep close, who knows when you'll lose them. Im pr.. more..

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