Gone

Gone

A Poem by Jim Palasty
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About me, many years old

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I've gone away to a very nice place

I have a new name, I have a new face.

No one knows my past or my future to be

and no one will ever dislike the new me.

But as sad as it is, I'll just never be

As happy as I am in my fantasy.

© 2008 Jim Palasty


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ah, if only we could live in our heads everyday.
-well, i can, but I'm a bum--I mean, starving artist (haha)
I'm still amazed that in just six lines you manage to say so much!
A true talent.
Great write!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 13, 2008

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Jim Palasty
Jim Palasty

Flint, MI



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Thanks to my wife, who posts her stories here, I've finally decided to do more than post a half-assed profile and no work to speak of. Looking forward to interacting with you all and developing my wor.. more..

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