The Ship

Good-bye

 

The ship has gone

left me ashore

it journies through life

with me no more.

I stand on the sand

look out to sea

cry to myself

they left without me.

Reviews

[K C Scott]

Cool, man!
This one makes me wonder what was going on in your head when you wrote it. I really like it, don't get me wrong. It just feels like there is another story in between the lines.