Why?

Why?

A Poem by Invisable_Girl

Am I to fat?

Not as pretty as her?

Do I joke too much?

 

Is it my friends?

Am I too smart?

Too depressing?

 

You leave for her.

All I can ask.

Is that why you stoped loving me?

 

Ill change for you!

Just dont go.

Ill lose weight and wear make up.

 

If only youll stay close.

Ill do what ever it takes.

My love is unconditional.

 

So why cant you love me?

© 2012 Invisable_Girl


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he dont matter there is always one guy that will love you just the way you are so dont give up! :) and this is an amazing write i truly love this!! and your a great writer! so keep on writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


don't listen to him... stay who are, don't change who you are just because someone has a problem with you.. if he really loves you then he'll realize that there is nothing wrong with you.. Joycelyn, you are one of my closest friends, so stay yourself, i don't want you to change just because of him,, like madison said.. screw him......

Posted 12 Years Ago


thank you.....ok madison

Posted 12 Years Ago


by the sounds of things your having a hard time just remember that witch dose not kill you shall make you stronger

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The poems I thought asking that same question... you have a good way with words and I like your writing style.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Your cool just the why you are! Screw him

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Added on April 30, 2012
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Hey. I'm Joycelyn. I'm 16 years old and i hate life. message me if you want to know more. more..

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