Painful Love

Painful Love

A Poem by Invisable_Girl

Foolish love

Loving even though you know he's the taker and breaker of hearts

Hoping he'll change

You fight

He leaves

Cry

Scream

Cut

Together once again knowing whats going to happen

Painful Love

© 2012 Invisable_Girl


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you should just find someone who aint like that.cause i found my perfect guy and he aint no heartbreaking jerk but i guess other guys are like that.well dont worry youll find ur match :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a love un breakable to most but i say you can break it and get you the most wonderful man ever i promise you it will all work out :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

move on! there are plenty of cute, handsome, and nice guys outhere. be confidence and hang out more with your good friends. don't fall so quick :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thank you :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


deep and powerful, nicely done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lived this one to the fullest and it's never easy. A well described poem of what unconditional love can do.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

so simple but at the same time reflects soo much pain. really love is blind! nice poem, i have really enjoyed reading it

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 29, 2012
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Invisable_Girl

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Hey. I'm Joycelyn. I'm 16 years old and i hate life. message me if you want to know more. more..

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