Alone

I can't do this anymore

Everything hurts

I feel like I'm burning inside but still no one sees

Or hears my silent screams

Why haven't people noticed that I'm not ok anymore

I smile when i feel like breaking down and crying

I don't know what I want anymore

I lost my friends....and Him

My chest feels hollow

It no longer has a heart that fills it

My soul has been tortured to the brink of insanity

But yet I'm still alive

How? Why?

Nobody cares if I'm gone

So why am I still here?

I'm so alone......

Reviews

[Enid Blake]

Strong emotions in this, you communicate these feelings well :)

[Steven Cash]

So much pent up and raw emotion.

Wonderful job Joycelyn.

92/100

[Invisable_Girl]

thank u:)

[Steven Cash]

np

[P.S.Chance]

how very lonely you sound! my heart has such compassion for the hurt that brought about this piece. good job.

[Invisable_Girl]

thank you:)

[Jason Dyer]

I can feel the emptiness in this. I assume it comes from a very personal experience involving a lover?

[Invisable_Girl]

yeah. love sucks

[.]

Sad, you express feelings very well. :) 100/100

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

so sad. depression such as this affects many every day and often is not recognized by those around you. Penned wonderfully well.

[That_Guy]

I know the feeling all to well.

[Invisable_Girl]

yea it goes away after a little while....

[That_Guy]

3 years and counting

[Invisable_Girl]

its been about 4 months and im finally starting to feel a little bit better

[That_Guy]

I hope it continues to get better

[Invisable_Girl]

i hope it gets better for u too

[That_Guy]

it will/is

[Invisable_Girl]

:)

[The Watcher]

This is really intense and sad. I know how terrible it feels to be lonely, but tough times like these can make us stronger. I deeply feel sorry for you Joycelyn and hope things get better soon. Kudos and good luck.

100/100

[Invisable_Girl]

thank u. and things are startn to get better

[The Watcher]

That's great to hear, and I hope they stay that way